Source: Official Guide Revised GRE 1st Ed. Part 4; Set 2; #1
A person who agrees to serve as mediator
Zhou Qiaohui
Hi, this sentence is too hard to comprehend for me... I am wondering what's grammatical reference behind this sentence structure? "Why is it not "a person who agrees to serve as a mediator between two warring factions abandons the right to take sides later, at the request of both "? Is it a kind of inversion of the sentence? I have no idea what "so" here for and how the"by so agreeing" helps to improve the sentence structure...
Oct 9, 2017 • Comment
Adam
Hi Zhou,
First, this sentence has been discussed in the other comments. Have you read them?
A person who agrees to serve as mediator between two warring factions at the request of both abandons by so agreeing the right to take sides later.
First, " at the request of both" modifies " agrees to serve as mediator."
Second, "by so agreeing" also modifies "agrees to serve as mediator." Here, "by so agreeing' means "by agreeing to [action that was previously stated]" = "by agreeing to serve as mediator." The word "so" in this case replaces a previously stated action.
Oct 9, 2017 • Reply
Zhou Qiaohui
I have read the discussed comment... but why put "abandons" between "at the request of both" and "by so agreeing?" ...
Will "A person who agrees to serve as a mediator between two warring factions at the request of both, by so agreeing, abandons the right to take sides later" also be valid?
Oct 10, 2017 • Reply
Adam
Hi Zhou,
Your construction makes it far less clear that "by so agreeing" modifies "abandons", and not something before it.
Oct 10, 2017 • Reply
Bilal Farooq
So is the passage saying that the two warring factions actually got a person to mediate and asked them to actually side with either one of them later on? (Indicated by saying "by so agreeing the right to take sides later). So they are saying to the mediator that please do pick a side later on.
The last para indicates that mediators should not do this because it would be a sham and then there would be no point to being a mediator if they sided with one side. Is that correct?
Sep 11, 2016 • Comment
Adam
Hi Bilal,
Let's look at this whole phrase:
A person who agrees to serve as mediator between two warring factions at the request of both abandons by so agreeing the right to take sides later.
This might be clearer if I put some commas in:
A person who agrees to serve as mediator between two warring factions at the request of both abandons, by so agreeing, the right to take sides later.
So, by agreeing to serve as mediator, the mediator abandons the right to take a side later on.
Does that make sense?
The next sentence explains why the mediator abandons this right.
Sep 15, 2016 • Reply
Sam Kinsman
Hi Tang,
In the phrase "by so agreeing," the word "by" has a similar meaning to "in." So in the sentence that Adam mentioned above, we are saying that in (or "by") agreeing to serve as a mediator, the mediator abandons the right to take a side later on.
Oct 19, 2016 • Reply
ZHENYU YANG
There is only one thing i want to say to your comment-------Perfect!
Jun 19, 2017 • Reply
Arjun
Hi, I had hard time deciphering this portion of text "..... request of both abandons by so agreeing the right to take the sides later".. Finding it hard to relate this to standard English sentence structure.
Sep 18, 2015 • Comment
Adam
Hi Arjun,
Let's take a look:
A person who agrees to serve as mediator between two warring factions at the request of both abandons by so agreeing the right to take sides later.
Note that "request" is a noun here, not a verb.
This sentence is talking about a person who agrees to serve as a mediator between two warring factions. The person agreed to do this "at the request of both." That means that both warring factions requested that this person serve as mediator.
Now, when this person made the choice to become mediator, s/he "abandons by so agreeing the right to take sides later."
So, this person abandons, or gives up, the right to take sides later, because s/he "so agreed." In other words, because s/he agreed to serve as mediator, s/he will no longer have the right to agree with one of the two factions later.
Nov 5, 2015 • Reply
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